I found these stories to be poorly edited, and without much depth (character insight, specifically.) Then again, im sure that's intentional - I was just hopin for a little more. The writing, while not bad, was not as complex as I would have liked, but that may just be personal preference. This is erotica, with limited plot, which probably skews my rating as I prefer a bit more storyline. The story definitely had some hot moments, so if you're looking for a light read with lots of sex this is probably perfect for you.