I took a (brief) time out from life and read the first story Stud Poker.
It was a highly entertaining piece of PWP. It wasn't bad - the sentences were well constructed, engaging, and interesting. Too interesting. I can't stop grinning at the language :D I'm pretty sure the author took his writing coach's advice to heart when he/she said 'use more descriptives!' I'm totally going three and a half stars for sheer entertainment value. Example, you say?"I pushed upwards, jamming my engorged meat into the wet cauldron of his mouth,"
"The guy wet-vacced my cock with a wicked suction, his tongue wagging across the boiling underside of my shaft, his teeth barely scraping the surface of my lust. "
A boiling cock sounds worrisome, to me, though.